"Action," meaning the scene descriptions, not "action genre." Now that we've cleared that up …

In order to write great action description in a scene that maximizes "white on the page," you have to translate the images in your head into very specific word choices. 

Why is "white on the page" important? Not only does it show your command of prose, but it also makes your script a "fast read"—which is critical for capturing the attention of producers and managers.

Maybe you’re brand new to screenwriting and don’t know where to start. Maybe you’ve been writing for a while, but you’re looking for more effective action-writing tools. Maybe you’re a professional writer, but you need to take your action writing to the next level. 

Merridith Allen will teach you how to write the kind of screen action that makes it impossible for a reader to put your script down. 

First, a discussion on what screen action is, and is not. 

Then, in-session practice, using the most effective imagery, language, and formatting to create stellar visual moments. (This session includes real-time writing exercises and discussion of the results, showcasing how Merridith's advice is effectively used.)

Finally, a discussion on how to use these visual moments to choreograph action sequences and scenes that jump off the page. 

This event will include: 

• Tools to transform mundane description into great action
• How to use the foundational tools to build sequences and acts
• Examples of stellar action writing and practical application of action writing tools
• Q&A

What attendees have said ...

"BLOWN AWAY! You absolutely transformed my understanding of white space on the page. And how action is created with a juxtaposition of images … in harmony with that space … In 90 minutes you made me a better screenwriter. I’m very grateful. As a self-taught, I didn’t grasp that relationship—the dance between image and space—until you brought it out so clearly in this workshop.Thank you for sharing your knowledge."